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You write the story-(better version) chapter 2
The rain gets heavier and I decide to get to the shelter as quickly as possible, I start sliding down the path until I get to the door. It looks like the door is locked but one shove and it opens. I step inside. It's dry but very dirty, the floor is full of grime and rusted pots and pans spill onto it, there is also a lone piece of rolled up carpet that looks about 100 years old. It's silent but a distant noise that sounds like crying is coming from a room at the end of a long hallway. I tip toe over to where the crying is coming from, it starts getting louder until I am right outside the door. I place my hand on the rusted door knob...

Should she not look in the room and leave the house?
Is someone with the boy?
Should she help the boy?
Do you want another chapter?